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Re: [HRNET] 10 Boilerplate Phrases That Kill Resumes



On 8 Jul 2009 at 8:49, Claire Belilos wrote:

> Resumes in western civilizations run along the same lines as in the U.S.

Do you think? I wonder what you consider to be "western
civilization"? Is Mexico included? Peru? Iran? Israel?

Why are warning flags popping up on this?
>
> For executives, the firms that cater often conduct actual robbery. I
> came across one National Executive Director of a fund-raising
> organization and an Executive Chef who paid exorbitant charges to have
> a "portfolio" created by such firms. One paid $15,000 and the other,
> quite recently, paid $30,000 though this last amount was supposed to
> include their helping the candidate find a job (i.e.. only advice and
> direction on how to land a job).

I consider robbery to take place when one person takes the money of
another WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT. Perhaps it's different in your part of
the world?

>Their resume, when I changed it, was not so long. Maybe 2 or 2 1/2
pages but it really described who they actually were and what they
had achieved and their potential.

Yes. I think it is better to describe who they actually are and what
they have achieved than the opposite which would be to describe what
they actually aren't and what they haven't achieved.

I think the problem, and my point actually lies in the original post
and that is that everyone offers different advice, and cases (such as
Claire is offering) aren't valuable because HR people vary a fair
amount in what they want, and even vary in terms of what works for
different types of positions.

I'm afraid the whole thing is a crapshoot because generalizations are
just as likely to be wrong as right.

So, here's what I have to say about resumes:

Use your head! If you can't figure out how to best present yourself
for the particular job, maybe you aren't suited for it.

Provide JUST enough to justify getting an interview for that
particular position.

http://free2thee.com

http://busylearners.com

PS. It just occurs to me we sell a helpcard on resumes, I think, but
it probably suffers from the same issues re: generalizations.




Robert Bacal
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Wed Jul 8, 2009 4:06 pm

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Interesting. Human voiced resumes. I like it better than all that jargon that really doesn't mean much. I think every resume I've ever received said "team...
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How much is a resume worth now? 9 million books on how to write one 7 million books and articles out there on the correct buzz words and phrases to use Don’t...
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Good morning all, I am not an HR professional but have been a member of this list for some time because I find the information shared here interesting and...
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When I first came across this small e-booklet, I was extremely impressed and I know a bunch of people grabbed it when it was available before. It's back, and...
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... Jeff, The difference between a good resume and a meaningless one is if through the reading of the resume you can see the special qualifications of the...
Claire Belilos
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... I'm wondering about when your story took place, and the last time you had an occasion to hire? Reason is I suspect that fashions change and what...
Robert Bacal
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AsktheHeadhunter recently did a very similar story, although a longer resume even. Though personally I doubt most folks can justify going beyond the standard...
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... Patricia Resumes in western civilizations run along the same lines as in the U.S. For executives, the firms that cater often conduct actual robbery. I...
Claire Belilos
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... Do you think? I wonder what you consider to be "western civilization"? Is Mexico included? Peru? Iran? Israel? Why are warning flags popping up on this? ...
Robert Bacal
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Speaking personally, I like the "human voice" example; it appeals to me. Speaking professionally, I would neither seek out and destroy those 10 boilerplate...
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