Jube,
Thank you very much for taking the time to critique the site for me. I was at a
networking function tonight and someone (I printed out a copy of the site and
brought it along) said something about not including my e-mail address. I wasn't
sure what they were getting at and they didn't have a chance to explain. I think
you've done so on their behalf and to my benefit.
The site is very basic. I was ordering new business cards from Vista Print and
saw that they had a very low-priced site available, along with a one-month
trial. I decided to quickly crank out a site somewhat as a trial effort. If I
want more than three pages I need to pay more. However, since I don't like
having their information in my domain (the part that reads ...vpweb..., I'm not
sure if I'm going to stick with them). While I decide, I will look into making
the changes you recommended.
Thank you again,
Rich

Richard Rostron
Positive Action Development
(815) 690-8433
positiveaction.vpweb.com




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From: Jube <Jube@...>
To: prbytes@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Thursday, January 8, 2009 3:12:31 PM
Subject: Re: [prbytes] Offering Professional Writing Services


Rich, your site is very basic, in blog format, and pleasing to the eye.
Did not give any ballparks for prices, but you did have a form on there
which is a good thing. I would suggest you take off your email address
because as time goes by the spam spiders will find it and it will be
sold and resold to spammers. Also, they now have a spider that goes in
an fills out the forms with porn, so you should put in one of those *are
you a human, fill this out* forms at the bottom of your form.

Nice start, might want to add some samples of your work or describe some
of your previous writings.

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Rich wrote:
> I have recently opened the doors on a new business venture, Positive Action
Development, offering professional writing services. The link below will bring
you to my new Web site if you're interested in more information. Mention this
e-mail and receive a 10-percent discount on your first contracted service with
Positive Action Development.
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> Richard Rostron, President
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